Before going any further, lemme answer tat all important question ‘who am I ?‘ Oh no…wait a minute…I m messing it up in the beginning itself, is actually ‘Where was I n wat was I doing? Well for the first term after the summer break...
I was toning down, eating up , running around and falling behind
I ve been ideating, philosophizing, jargonizing and bullshitting
But of course I ve not been dating, mating or hating anyone
I got confused, confessed my love, loved my confessions
I compressed my thoughts, expressed my feelings but never tried to impress
I was lazy n crazy when things were hazy n they weren’t easy
But of course I never kissed any misses nor missed any kisses
I ve been hanging out, hanging in and even hanging up on calls
I ve been dining out, whining a lot and lining up some stuff
I was flying on highs, swimming on lows and jogging on plateaus
But of course I ve not been sleeping on pills, nor losing sleep over bills
PS0 : If this description fits anyone other than me, its purely coincidental, n if it fits me..hmm....tat was the purpose, rite ?
PS1 : The travelogue will b spun off n continued as a different thread
13 comments:
a spin off separately for the travelogue...what more can the global readers ask for :)
shud say that this is a great comeback...with some Poetry complemented with some rhythm making it some RAP....
can visualise a video for this; Khan rapping with the likes of eminem n snoop dogg!!!
your best work till date..dint know u had it in you :D
loved d play of words..can`t wait to read Part-2
Awesome shit ...
After the jugglery of words, it all made sense - Surprisingly ....
:) Keep writing
oru john keats olichirppundu ennonnum parayunnilla
ennalum tharkkedilla
[:)]
Metamorphosis... Way to go buddy
poetry??hehehehe...nice one bro..loved the flow..keep updating more often..
This is definitely by far your magnum opus.. but a promise of installment has just raised our hopes a little more! :D Cant wait for it..
Rhyme dons the mantle outside of reason's ken.
Hope you find a reason to finish what you began.
I love the play with words.. the internal rhyme is really nice. Not a huge fan of rap myself, but the beat and mood it created was nice. :)
I kept readin... n it kept leadin...
me on to the next line n level!!
Awesome stuff man!! :)
I was readin' and scrollin'...the words kept pourin,
Outta your latest rap-gig "Where was you and what was you doing?"
I do gotta say that your rap's got some zap,
Keep churnin it nigga, coz u surely got the knack!
@ Pams - hihi rapping would b cool, especially with the DJ from leeds ( wink )
@ Sangini - thnks mate
@ Fagin - Yup, shit it is !!! n awesome if u say so
@ anonymous - Thnks
@ Deepak - Thanks da
@ Menon - Tried it just like tat :)
@ Gokul - Have i told u tat ur creative self has been one of ma influences..
@ Chaitu - :)
@ Jack - Thnks man, we ll dance to its tune durin the MC return party
@ Burhan - Just some random fart this is ...a small FM :P
@ Neel - F***a, instead of wasting ur writing skills by just commenting, update ur blog
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